On one hand, Max can choose to consent via The Rituals, or not, but on the other, the coven (which he technically isn’t a member of) can offer his services without consulting him first. So, basically what I’m getting at is that it’s really unclear about the whole consent thing. They said pretty clearly that Max isn’t a part of the coven (which seems kinda stupid imho.) But apparently the coven can make arrangements for his “services” without his consent/participation in the negotiations. The other reason is the kind of grey area about whether or not a Big Brother is a part of the coven or isn’t.
So, theoretically speaking, no witch/coven should be able to enthrall Max and receive “The Gift.” Sure, they could enthrall him, but unless they simply want another servant to help with some chore or another, it’s kind of pointless unless they were doing it as an act of war or something. The ritual supposedly requires mutual consent, and I don’t care how you define “enthrallment,” that’s not consent. The reason why is partially due to the incident with Dee. Because of this, I assumed that anything that was referred to as one of “Their Laws” would have similar consequences if broken. At the beginning, a lot of emphasis was placed on “The Rituals,” and how there were pretty severe consequences if they weren’t followed. The biggest thing that sticks out is about how vulnerable Max is or not. When I read it/see it, it takes all of ten seconds to get through with almost every scene.Īnyways, I wanted to add my two cents on things that I feel don’t add up or make sense. I love the sex scenes, but it would be nice if they were extended a bit. One quick… criticism, I guess… although that feels like too strong of a word for this. Big Brother - Chapter 1 207957įirst off, I’d like to thank the author for this story, I’m really enjoying it.
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